The king has no memory
that we were robbed
of metaphors.
that we were robbed
of metaphors.
Dense amnesia envelops
the slave-child.
The present
would soon be lived through
(but he’d forget).
And the kingdom
has guided channels
serving anaesthetic
to a select few
who feel.
Today, unguarded,
at sundown fled
prisoners
of war
into forests
bearing familiar names
on raw, peevish barks.
Perhaps the Druids
still pray for us.
7 comments:
Bah!I'm not sure I understand the context but I can sense something.I love the amnesia bit, the escapade of the prisoners of war!
But you found the metaphors again, din't you? perhaps in the tiger-skin bag of the Druids. They pray for you, I think :)
Lovely writing, esp. the very disciplined control over lines and stanzas.
Beautiful writing,each line says so much.
Ah,you make me think.
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful writing.
Really!
beautiful :-)
this is very beautifully expressed...
i love the opening lines
Hmph!!! Eta kaar jonno lekha?? BTW, khub bhaalo hoyeche. Mes ze loves itszzzz!!!
heeeee!
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